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Blast Burn

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The second in a set of Pokemon prints I’m doing to celebrate Pokemon X and Y’s release OwOb I’ll be doing one for each group of starters (Grass, Fire, Water) All using unique moves from their respective types! These are each of the fire type starters! Can you guess which moves they’re using?! OwOb

You can see Grass Type Frenzy Plant here: matsuyama-takeshi.deviantart.c…

Next up... Hydro Cannon!!
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I'll have a go at this critique...

So I really like how you drew the Pokemon in general. The shading's pretty unique and i especially like how you showcased each of them. My first concern is that while there seems to be a different variety of Pokemon, it feels like they're all squeezed into a small portion of space. I also like the fire you drew, especially the red flames at the bottom, but they feel alittle empty. In addition to that, maybe you could try adding a few more oranges/yellows to the rest of the flames to give it a sense of boldness so the viewer could (can't find a word to say it any other way, Im sorry) appreciate the overall picture.

So yeah.

- Likes -
* Unique vision
* The use of various Pokemon
* The different types of colors used

- Dislikes -
* Feels pretty cramped.
* My gaze sometimes goes here and there
* Some of the fire could be a bit more 'intense'

Otherwise, great work! Looking forward to your Hydro Cannon piece!